Blink

Obrázek uživatele Naughtilus
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She blinked
She was but a sapling, reaching for the sun, just like her sisters.

She blinked
She stood tall, taller than her sisters, and as far as she could see, a spruce forest stretched.

She blinked
Strange structures stood where some of her sisters once stood. Those structures appeared to be made...of her sisters.

She blinked
Gone were the spruce structures, replaced by tall ones made of a strange material, and gone were more of her sisters.

She blinked
She stood alone amongst structures of metal and crystal, so tall that she couldn't see the sun. She wept.

Komentáře

Obrázek uživatele Kahvi

Oh, brava! What a way to tackle that prompt!!

Obrázek uživatele Naughtilus

Would you believe that I got the idea at about 23:53, and started writing at 23:56?

Obrázek uživatele Kleio

To je strašlivě nefér a smutné! A krásně napsané.

Obrázek uživatele Naughtilus

Ted hlavne, aby mi to uznali casove :D

Obrázek uživatele Owlicious

Je to nádherné, i když hrozně mrazivě smutné. Chytilo za srdce.

Obrázek uživatele Naughtilus

A pritom ja to povazuju za asi to nejhorsi, co jsem doposud tady vyplodil, vcetne lonska.

Obrázek uživatele Envy

To bylo nádherně napsané a úplně mě to chytlo za srdce jak smutné to zároveň je

Obrázek uživatele Naughtilus

A pritom je to petiminutovy literarni ekvivalent oscar bait filmu, napsany v panice. Se az stydim, ze jsem to napsal.

Obrázek uživatele Smrtijedka

Teda, přejel mi pořádný mráz po zádech (a taky mi to připomnělo Krtečka, asi jsem infantilní).

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